Bonjour j'avais une tâche danglais a faire sur deux sujet , je me suis aidée d'un traducteur et j'aimerai qu'on me corrige les fautes si sa vous dérange pas , l
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Bonjour j'avais une tâche danglais a faire sur deux sujet , je me suis aidée d'un traducteur et j'aimerai qu'on me corrige les fautes si sa vous dérange pas , la tâche final est facultatif mais j'ai voulus essayé de la faire quand même merci d'avance
1) écrivez un texte dans le journal du lycée qui raconte votre écoles de rêve :
my dream school would have the court that on Saturday and Sunday. Rest the week, have dessert with caramel, have foreign language teachers to learn another language. That can be brought back our animals in the classroom and that the notes be replaced by skills. That court made on the beach, in the sea in a bathing suit. With relaxing music. A dream school would have a crazy atmosphere, and you have a dream school?
2) vous avez était malade pour rattraper vos cours vous vous êtes aider de professeur en ligne pour rattraper vos cours , expliqué votre témoignage
I stay sick and pendants that time I catch up with my classes with teachers online, my great These people helped her understand that I do not get to do. I found it great to give jobs to people who needed it. Despite the distance they still get to tell me so I can understand however that my least most is as remote teachers can not supervised students and even less to see their work and corrected. They view speaks per call. I recommend everyone to try at least once, it's something very rewarding whether for its own culture where very personal.
1) écrivez un texte dans le journal du lycée qui raconte votre écoles de rêve :
my dream school would have the court that on Saturday and Sunday. Rest the week, have dessert with caramel, have foreign language teachers to learn another language. That can be brought back our animals in the classroom and that the notes be replaced by skills. That court made on the beach, in the sea in a bathing suit. With relaxing music. A dream school would have a crazy atmosphere, and you have a dream school?
2) vous avez était malade pour rattraper vos cours vous vous êtes aider de professeur en ligne pour rattraper vos cours , expliqué votre témoignage
I stay sick and pendants that time I catch up with my classes with teachers online, my great These people helped her understand that I do not get to do. I found it great to give jobs to people who needed it. Despite the distance they still get to tell me so I can understand however that my least most is as remote teachers can not supervised students and even less to see their work and corrected. They view speaks per call. I recommend everyone to try at least once, it's something very rewarding whether for its own culture where very personal.
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1. Réponse 0Marine
1) In my dreams, we would go to school only on Saturdays and on Sundays and we could bring our animals in class. Sometimes, we would have class on the beach, in front of the sea, with a relaxing music. The rest of the week, I would eat caramel deserts, I would learn foreign languages with my teacher.
In my dream school, everybody would be happy. What about you ? Do you have a dream school ?
2) i've been sick but I tried to catch up my lessons with an online teacher. He helped me to understand what I did not get. I thought web school was great because even if we were not in the same room, the teacher explained me everything. We spoke together with video conferencing. I recommend everyone to try web school.
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2. Réponse Ibtissemchz
déjà l'école de mes rêve serait mieux traduit par: "the school of my dream would have"....après je n'ai pas compris ce que tu voulais dire, si tu peux expliquer en Français stp.après si par "court" tu voulais dire les "cours" (en classe), ça se dit course en anglais.
pour dire "les cours se feraient sur la plage tu dis " courses will be made on beach".
pour ta derniere phrase, c'est encore une fois "the school of my dream will have a a crazy atmosphere. What about you? what will be the school of your dream?"
bon courage!;)