Bonjour j'ai un DM de Anglais a rendre j'ai écris un texte mais il faut mettre le texte au past continuous et le past simple. Voila le texte merci, (je suis en
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Bonjour j'ai un DM de Anglais a rendre j'ai écris un texte mais il faut mettre le texte au past continuous et le past simple. Voila le texte merci, (je suis en 3ème) :
In the middle of the night, I heard a shrill noise coming from the kitchen.After 5 minutes the noise didn't stop so I decided to get up and take my courage in both hands. I walk towards the kitchen and there... at the back of the kitchen I'm sure, I saw a shadow! I run to the shadow that was at the back of the kitchen but there was nothing else. I barely had time to breathe when
I felt a blow on my head and with the shock I fall stiffly on the ground. The next morning around 12:00, I woke up on the floor with a big bump on my forehead but; nothing had changed in the house, nothing had disappeared, nothing had been damaged, nothing...
In the middle of the night, I heard a shrill noise coming from the kitchen.After 5 minutes the noise didn't stop so I decided to get up and take my courage in both hands. I walk towards the kitchen and there... at the back of the kitchen I'm sure, I saw a shadow! I run to the shadow that was at the back of the kitchen but there was nothing else. I barely had time to breathe when
I felt a blow on my head and with the shock I fall stiffly on the ground. The next morning around 12:00, I woke up on the floor with a big bump on my forehead but; nothing had changed in the house, nothing had disappeared, nothing had been damaged, nothing...
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1. Réponse heloisedlt
Réponse:
I walked towards the kitchen
"I'm sure" ---> I was sure mais la phrase n'a pas bcp de sens... stv tu peux inverser et dire " I saw a shadow, I was sure of it !"
I ran to the shadow
nothing else pourrait être "nothing here"
I fell stiffly (fall fell fallen)
et voilà. Sinon tkt c'est très bien :)